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Post by jackofblades on Jan 4, 2014 14:18:09 GMT -4
Name : Conin Jaques Player: jackofblades Chronicle : CBN
Nature : Genius / sociopath Demeanor : Director Clan: BRUJAH
Generation : 12th Haven : my office suite Concept : research and development (16 freebie) Attributes 7/5/3 (no freebie points spent) Physical----(3)--------------------------------- Strength : 000 Dexterity: 00 Stamina : 0
Social ------(5)-------- Charisma: 00 Manipulation : 000 Appearance: 000
Mental----(7)---------- Perception : 00 Intelligence : 0000 Wits : 0000
Abilities: 13/9/5 Talents ------(5)------(6) freebies Alertness : 00X Athletics : Brawl : Dodge: Expression : 00 Intimidation: subterfuge:000
Skills -----------(9)-------------- Crafts:000 Drive : 0 Etiquette: Firearms : 00 Melee: Performance:000 Survival:
Knowledge --------(13)------------- Academics: 000X Computer: 00 Finance: Linguistics: 00 (french, German) Medicine :000X Politics: Science : 000
Disciplines: 3 celerity: 00 potence: presence:0
Backgrounds 5 (1 freebie) herd 0X Resources : 0000 Generation: 0
Virtues 7-------------------------- Conscience : 2 Self- control :4 Courage :4
Humanity : 6
Willpower 0000XXXX
Blood pool: 11/max 1 per turn max trait 5
Merits: Dual Nature: 2pt Common Sense: 1pt Lucky: 3pt
Flaws : Addiction 3pt (female blood) Anosmia 2pt Necrophile: 3pt
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Post by JLAM on Jan 5, 2014 11:14:56 GMT -4
i have to say there seems to be alot of merits and flaws I will say No for the moment
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Post by Eric on Jan 6, 2014 17:01:43 GMT -4
This sheet is actually a mess. The Attributes are messed up, the Abilities are way high, you would have had to sacrifice ALL your freebie points to get that many merits, there's a hard-cap of 7 points of flaws that you can take, as a "genius" character it should have more than three dots in intelligence, he has 5 dots in disciplines instead of 3 and there's other assorted eraser-points on the sheet. Clearly it does need work. My advice would be to sit down with the character generation chapter and look at each step one at a time as you comb through it.
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Post by jackofblades on Jan 6, 2014 21:27:08 GMT -4
ok thank you i'll be reworking him now just to check do attributes all start with one dot like on the sheets? if they de then my new working for this character is good age and all that will be made soon i'me thinking about 50 years as a vampire and thinking of using david boreanaz for his model, is this all right?
ps. if anyone would like to make me an av please use a pic of him with the goatee and mustache
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Post by Eric on Jan 7, 2014 21:33:23 GMT -4
This character is still not right. My last word was to sit down with the character creation rules and comb it from scratch. I found several things wrong, the most glaring is that you've been spending freebie points like everything costs one per dot. Aside from that there's problems with your knowledge ratings and virtues that tell me that you haven't read the character generation chapter nearly well enough. In answer to your question about Attributes, yes, Attributes start with a free dot in each. I will review this character once more when you've corrected all of it. Let me know when you want it looked over.
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Post by Eric on Jan 8, 2014 20:27:07 GMT -4
After talking with Adrianna about the character earlier today, we can accept it as it is right now.
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Post by jackofblades on Mar 22, 2014 1:15:30 GMT -4
with the 2 dots in herd should i write out the npcs of the 7 people i am using for them each is who my character refurs to as his children each character is between 19 and 23, or is that up to you as the storyteller? If i am able to design them as they are all stalk-home syndrome victims who have been with him for years, i would quit enjoy designing these's characters they are nothing more then basic mortals each being used to study the affects of eating habits and other things on the taste of the blood.
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